If anyone would like to offer to read and remark on a 4800 word suspense story, I need a good opinion on the houseboat story. I do some funky things with temporal organization, and I want to really make sure that it's still sensible. Message me if you're interested!
Also, late edit: if someone with a bit of a strong stomach or a willingness to pretend they have one is willing, I would really appreciate a reader for, "Death, Be Not Me." I don't need a critique for that one -- I had two great reads, one from B. Nagel and the other from B. Marclar. What I need for this 2400 word story is some marketing advice. Let me know -- thanks!