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Life is what you make of it.
Bullshit. You can't make life.
but you can make decisions. You can make choices. It's not the same thing.
The first few times I killed I didn't get that. I thought the action was the thing. I was making my mark. I was claiming my name. I was staking out my space. I was the guy who blew three guys heads off on the third Sundays of three months in a row.
Hegel taught me that. The dialectic of the bitch my teacher called it. You got a man and you got a bitch. A man thinks he's the big stuff. He can boss his bitch around. But his bitch is the one actually doing things in the world. His bitch is the one making a mark.
And I wanted to be that bitch.
So I started making marks.
But Hegel was wrong. Hegel's a dumbass. Hegel's a bitch.
'Cause after you kill someone, there's no mark. The world doesn't know and doesn't care. A handful of people. Maybe a few hundred. Maybe a few thousand. That's a lot, but it's not the world.
You can't make a mark on the world. It's a lie.
But you can make a mark on yourself. You're the only thing you can mark.
At first when I realized that, I was all pissed off and crying like a little girl. I thought I'd wasted everything. Blown every chance I had.
But then I realized. I had done that. I had made a mark on myself.
The moment I decided to make pull that trigger, I marked myself. I didn't mark the world as being one person smaller. I didn't mark the guy as being dead. I marked myself as a guy who could decide to take someone's life.
I had defined myself. I had looked at the options and created my own. I had created myself. You can't create the world. You can't create things in the world; you can only rearrange them. But you can create yourself.
So don't worry. Just open your mouth wide while I turn on the drill. This won't mark you. It'll mark me.
It won't end your life.
It will define mine.
This hurts me more than it hurts you. I loved this! Thanks for posting.
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed it, Scott!
ReplyDeleteWhat a great ending! Thanks for posting this.
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